WISH OF A DYING MAN………
WISH OF A DYING MAN………
..When I die….
do not close my eyes
because
even in my death
I can not bear it
that I may not see you anymore……
When I die……
consign me to the flames
before it is too late
before my arms get stiff
because as I die
I still would yearn
to hold you in my arms……
When I die….
lay me to rest
in your heart
becauseI want to live forever
as my muffling heartbeats
synchronise
my love for you
to your beating heart….
The love shall stay forever
becauseit is eternal
Ethereal
just as you are
when you love me
though
I MAY BE AWAY
THOUGH
I MIGHT HAVE GONE………
.I shall live with you
forever
,in your world
in my words…
and you shall never
ever feel alone
When I die….
do not cry
for that would cause me pain
and tear me apart
in much the same way
as my Poetry
dying out in your heart
When I die…..
let melive in your heart
because
love shall live on
for ever and ever
When I die…
..I will not die
because
living in your
loving heart for ever
I shall provethat
DEATH IS NOTTHE TRUTH,
MADE OUT TO BE
BUTA SWEET LIE……! !
When I die…
close your eyes
and think of me
and my words……
which would be left as incomplete
as mewithout you………
as incomplete as this poem
2 Comments:
Although This Poem Appears To Have Been Posted By You Way Back In2004 I Read It For The First Time Only This Morning Having Joined Kavitanjali Blog Only A Month Back.I Am Surprised None Has Commented On This Poem So Far.
I would be Underplaying My Emotions If I Say "It Is An Excellent Piece Of Work And You Have Echoed Your Thoughts Very Subtly And Aptly.Only That If Death Is Seen As The Fourth Stage In One's Living and The Soul Considered Immortal,Will The Thoughts Expressed In Your Poem Remain The Same?Perhaps You May Like To Compose Another Poem With This As Food For Thought.My Best Wishes. Regards BAIYU
thanks baiyu
surely your thoughts are inspiring
regards
mukul
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